Ms. Ursula Archer has notified the Bear of a few minor revisions to The Dream Thief on the advice of one of the Bear's male cubs, who is a writer. (Wordsmithing runs in the family.) The ending is expanded a tad to make it more satisfying. The Bear's cub thought "Joshua" and "John" were too close for comfort, so Joshua's name got changed to Justin. "Justin" is reminiscent of "justice," so it's a better name for a defense lawyer anyway.
The new version is up at PDF manuscript link in the right column. If you haven't read it yet, your wait paid off. "Who's Molly?" indeed!
And no feedback? The Bear needs to know if there are glaring problems. He's sure Ursula Archer can take criticism. And if you enjoyed it, toss the Bear a fish and say so. Please?